This Idaho Life


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  1. Pretty good start here. You ask some good follow up questions in the interview to supplement the story. I do think that you could set it up better. Instead of saying, “Here’s my friend and she’s going to tell a story,” think about how to get into the narrative more seamlessly. Maybe start with an overview of the key meanings–“Hospitals can be scary places, especially for 13-year-old girls on their first day of Candy stripping” or something like that. Or start with something from Cassie and then you jump in after a few seconds with more backstory. In short, just think about how this narrative should start.

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